emilyexorsist: (DBSK: YunJae kiss)
[personal profile] emilyexorsist
Title: Fight It Out
Pairing: YunJae (Yunho/Jaejoong)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: adult content, language
Disclaimer: My words but sadly, not my boys.
Summary: Jae is a jealous bitch and Yunho's temper flares.



“For fuck’s sake, Jae! You were the one who brought this up!”

“You were the one who brought her up!”

“She’s my friend. I’m allowed to be friends with someone outside these four walls!”

Junsu frowned and shifted closer to Yoochun, away from the door. Yunho and Jae’s argument could be heard throughout the entire apartment and he found himself wishing he’d heeded Changmin’s advice and escaped while he could. The maknae had left as soon as Jae started turning green eyes on Go Ara.

The door bust open and Yunho stormed in, followed by an irate looking Jae.

“I don’t know why you don’t just lock me away and be done with it!” Yunho roared, spinning back round to face Jae.

Yoochun rolled his eyes from his spot on the sofa. “Can you two have your domestic somewhere else? Junsu and I are trying to watch the match.”

“Yeah, it’s the final and...”

Junsu trailed off as Jae threw his hands in the air and bellowed, “You know what? If I could, I would. That way you’d be able to keep your hands off trash like her.”

Yunho looked ready to punch Jae and Junsu half hoped he would, then maybe they’d knock each other out and leave he and Yoochun to watch the match in peace.

“Jae, how many times? How many fucking times are we going to do this?” Yunho had reached his limit. All he wanted was to run from the apartment and leave Jae and his jealousy to fester alone. But he knew that was impossible, security wouldn’t allow for it so he’d have to remain here with Jae and fight it out.

“As long as it takes!” Jae screamed, shoving both his palms against Yunho’s chest. “You used to put me first!”

Yunho managed to stand his ground but he couldn’t stop the hand that raised, ready to smack some sense into Jae. “When have I ever not put you first?” He was honestly astounded. His whole fucking universe revolved around Jae. Surely he knew that.

Junsu winced and tucked his legs beneath his body. “Can we just leave?” he whispered to Yoochun. “Changmin said—”

But Yoochun was shaking his head. “No, no, let’s wait a bit. It’s getting good,” he smirked.

Junsu didn’t think that their two Hyung’s battering each other was his idea of “getting good.”

“I can’t believe you’d even think something so stupid!” Yunho said, forcing his hand to drop to his side.

“Were you going to hit me? You were, weren’t you? Well go right ahead,” Jae said with fiery eyes. “Mess up my face and then maybe you can pretend I’m that ugly bitch you keep bringing up to the apartment.”

Yunho stared at Jae. “Have you lost your mind?” Go Ara was a friend and nothing more. Jae was the only person he had eyes for but it drove Yunho to madness when his lover’s bitter jealousy raged like a monsoon.

“Maybe I have, but at least I can admit something is wrong with me.” Jae was trembling now.

“You’re right there, there is something wrong with you but there is absolutely nothing wrong with me,” Yunho spat.

Jae flared up again. “You can’t even admit you like her!” His hands flew to Yunho’s chest again but Yunho was quicker and he grabbed Jae’s wrists to hold him fast.

“Fine, I’ll admit it,” Yunho said through gritted teeth. He didn’t even feel a pang of remorse as Jae’s eyes widened in fright. “I like her. In fact, I love her. She listens to me, she makes me laugh and she’s a great fucking friend.”

Jae opened his mouth, ready to screech a string of insults at his lover but Yunho shook him roughly.

“But that’s all, Jae, she’s a great fucking friend.” Yunho’s eyes burned with anger.

“I don’t like her,” Jae said, glaring at Yunho.

Yunho snorted. “I don’t care.”

“You should!” Jae yelled. “You fucking should!”

“Why? So you can carry on pretending that you’re the only person in my life?”

Jae tried twisting his wrists from Yunho’s grasp but Yunho shook him again and Jae stopped. “I wish I was.”

Yunho scoffed. “I would say you don’t mean that, but I know you do.”

Jae sagged and nodded.

He looked so dejected that Yunho had to fight to harden his heart and not cave to Jae’s big eyes looking into his sorrowfully.

“Oh hurry up and kiss him.”

Yunho was startled enough to look up and spot Junsu and Yoochun sitting on the sofa.

“When did you get here?” he asked.

“Seriously?” Yoochun rolled his eyes and cast a withering look at Junsu who shrugged and looked slightly awkward. Yunho felt immediately guilty, he knew how much Junsu hated their blow outs. “Let’s see,” Yoochun went on. “Right around the beginning of the match so that would be, what, Junsu? Forty five minutes ago?”

Junsu nodded.

Yunho frowned. “I’m sorry, we didn’t...”

“You should have fucked off with Changmin,” Jae interrupted loudly.

Yunho tightened his grip on Jae’s wrists momentarily and glared. “Stop it.”

“Stop what?” Jae baited.

“Being an asshole,” Yunho growled.

“Yeah, okay.” Yoochun waved at them. “Still here. Now can you either kiss and make up or fuck off?”

Junsu nodded in agreement and flicked his eyes to the TV wistfully. He didn’t even know the score anymore.

“I’m not kissing that traitorous bastard,” Jae said and Yunho knew if he deigned to look at him he would see him pouting petulantly.

“Likewise,” he said and began tugging Jae out the room. “I’m not done with you.”

“Ohhh what are you going to do with me?” Jae said churlishly as he trailed reluctantly in Yunho’s wake. “Lock me up?”

“No,” Yunho clenched his teeth together before saying. “That would be your fantasy.”

“No,” Jae corrected. “My fantasy would be you and me. Alone, together, without ugly bitches like Go Ara.”

Yunho had reached their bedroom and he whirled around, slamming Jae against the door. “Will you give it a rest? I only have eyes for you! Can’t you see that you’re the most important person in my life?”

Jae’s eyes widened and he looked at Yunho with a mixture of contempt and delight. “She’s beautiful, though.”

Yes,” Yunho exhaled through his nose. “Go Ara is the most beautiful woman in the world and still all I can think about when I’m with her is the next time I get to see you!”

Jae’s eyes were still wide and he opened and closed his mouth a few times as though deciding what to say. Yunho could see the cogs turning and he hoped to God this time Jae would drop it and move on from this jealous spate.

“I want you to call her and apologise.” Yunho said. “Then ask her round for dinner.”

“What?!” Jae struggled against Yunho who still had him pinned up against the door. “No fucking way. You’re insane.”

“No, that would be you,” Yunho said, irritated. “If you don’t call her now I’m going to leave this apartment and take her to dinner. That should give Cassiopeia something to talk about.”

Jae’s eyes flared. “You wouldn’t.”

“Oh, I really would.” Yunho knew he was winning. “Now, do you need to use my phone?”

“No,” Jae flashed him a scathing look and dug into his pocket to fish out his own mobile. They were pressed so closely together that Yunho could feel Jae’s fingers against his own thigh as he removed the phone and lifted it to dial.

“Good boy,” Yunho said and patted Jae’s cheek.

“I hate you.” Jae lifted the phone to his ear. “I’ll apologise for chasing her off but she is not coming for dinner.”

“Fine,” Yunho assented. Secretly he had been hoping Jae would refuse to invite her back, they had just spent a week apart and Yunho had actually had plans that involved the two of them and no one else. Go Ara visiting had just been a cup-of-coffee type event, nothing more, although Jae didn’t need to know that. Thank god he was giving in; Yunho had been beginning to fear that his own temper and Jae’s jealousy had ruined any chances of a steamy reconciliation.

“Go Ara?” Jae greeted grudgingly. “No, it’s Jae.”

Yunho smiled as Jae pulled a face and mimed ‘bitch’ at Yunho. Yunho rolled his eyes and shoved Jae harder into the door.

Jae gasped and tried fighting back while Go Ara said something on the phone. “No, I... no that’s not true... hey— how would you like it if... do you want me to apologise or not?... yes, I am capable... that’s an unfounded accusation... no Yunho didn’t ask me to apologise, I’m doing it out of the goodness of my heart... I can be nice... fine, I’m fucking sorry!... that’s as genuine as I can manage.... what do you mean ‘apology not accepted?... no....no... I’m not saying that... fine, I’m so sorry Go Ara, beautiful Korean princess that I, Jaejoong, am an insane, jealous asshole and chased you from our house. Better?... fine... no, tell him yourself... bye.”

Jae threw the phone down onto the bed and looked up to glare at Yunho. “Go Ara says you owe me a blow job.”

“Like hell she did.” Yunho snorted but grinned as he said. “Was that so hard?”

“Nearly impossible,” Jae scowled, sulking against the door.

“Hey, I forgive you now,” Yunho said. “Surely that prize is worth your efforts?”

Jae continued to look moody. “I should be the one forgiving you. I was just standing up for who I love.”

“Having other friends doesn’t mean I love you any less. I would wear a ring with your name on it if I could. I belong to you forever.”

Jae lifted his hand and waggled the finger with Yunho’s ring on it.

“You’re as good as my wife,” Yunho laughed, kissing Jae’s knuckles, all his previous rage gone as he pressed against Jae in a completely different manner.

Jae smiled, looking self-satisfied. “Are you ready to debauch your wife?”

“As long as she cooks me dinner tonight,” Yunho leaned forward to kiss Jae but Jae ducked away, scowling.

“I’m still a man, you know.”

“Such a pretty boy,” Yunho teased but reached down to grab Jae’s crotch crudely all the same.

“Not as pretty as Go Ara.”

Yunho pulled back, not wanting to revisit the argument they’d just left. He decided to play nice. “No.”

Jae instantly kicked up a fuss, trying to fend Yunho off.

“Prettier,” Yunho added, grinning. “You’re the most beautiful of them all.”

Jae always responded to being told he was the prettiest, the most gorgeous, the best Yunho had ever had. It didn’t matter that Yunho in fact had had nobody else as he knew with unwavering certainty that Jae was all he would ever need until the end of time.

Finally, Jae looked at Yunho. He was frowning but Yunho almost laughed at how easily he could see past Jae’s moody exterior. “I need you,” Yunho whispered, ducking his chin slightly as he leant in.

The moan that Jae let out was enough for Yunho to bridge the gap and kiss him.

“I need you, too,” Jae said as he pulled away, his hands reaching for Yunho’s belt buckle. “I only ever need you.”

Yunho knew Jae was waiting for Yunho to respond likewise but he staved off saying what his lover wanted to hear for now, instead allowing Jae to unclasp his belt and reach into his boxers. He closed his eyes as Jae touched him, always so eager to connect in every way possible.

“This is what I need,” Jae said hoarsely as they both looked down to see Jae’s slender fingers wrapped around Yunho’s cock.

“You have it,” Yunho said, bracing himself with both hands either side of Jae’s head. “You have all of me.”

“Do I?” Jae gave Yunho those big, brown eyes and his stomach lurched with desire.

“Yes.” Yunho said. “You know you do.”

“It’s still nice to hear out loud,” Jae said, tugging on Yunho’s cock.

Yunho panted, and dropped his forehead to Jae’s. “You make me so crazy. As crazy as you are.”

“I’m not crazy,” Jae denied.

“Yes, you are. But I love you so it doesn’t matter,” Yunho told him.

Jae looped his spare arm around Yunho’s neck and roped him in for a kiss. Their lips met and Yunho’s world exploded as it always did when Jae kissed him. He moaned, feeling Jae’s tongue against his own and said. “Turn around.”

“Are we doing it here?”

“Yeah,” Yunho said as he grabbed Jae’s waistband, tugging them down to reveal his bare ass. He reached over to a book shelf and plucked a small white tube from between two books.

“Ohh,” Jae breathed, bracing himself as he felt two lubed fingers press up inside him. “This is the best part.”

“Is it?” Yunho asked, kissing every bit of Jae’s skin he could reach. He trailed his lips over Jae’s shoulders, up to lick the shell of his ear and to nose into his soft, black hair.

“Almost,” Jae admitted, arching his back as Yunho worked three fingers in and out of his body. “I love you touching me.”

Yunho loved touching Jae. The way he responded was so erotic it should be illegal. These were the times Yunho felt justified in thinking he should be the one to lock Jae up. But he knew with fierce certainty that he would be the only man to ever see Jae like this.

Jae was his as much as he was Jae’s.

“I need it,” Jae panted, reaching one hand back to grab Yunho for a messy kiss. Yunho obliged and pulled his fingers from Jae’s ass.

“I’ll give it to you.” Yunho said and crowded against Jae, the tip of his cock pushing into the tight, hot hole.

Jae held his breath, his body tensing at the intrusion but soon he was moaning and pressing back against Yunho.

Yunho was sure they were made for this, every part of him loved Jae and this was just another way to prove that love, to make Jae see how much he needed him. He decided it was about time he told Jae so. “I need you more than you know,” he said roughly, pushing deep inside his lover.

Jae gasped, caught between trying to turn around to be as close as possible and push back onto Yunho’s cock.

“Oh, god,” he moaned. “I want... I need—”

Yunho understood and wrapped both arms around Jae’s torso. His hands slid up under Jae’s t-shirt, splaying them over his abdomen and up to his chest. He kissed the side of Jae’s neck, tugging him flush against his body ‘til they were as wrapped up in each other’s space as two people could be. He knew Jae liked nothing more than to be held by him.

“I love you so much,” Yunho said against Jae’s neck. “It hurts sometimes.”

“I know, I know,” Jae chanted. “Never enough... but always too much... ohh.”

Jae lurched forward, his hands skidding down the door but Yunho caught him, shoving forward hard and fast again and again.

“Yunho...uh,” Jae’s breath hitched. “I love this, I love you.”

With one final thrust Yunho cried out, coming as Jae clenched around him and came against the door. The pleasure was so much it was almost excruciating and Yunho collapsed forward, his t-shirt clinging to him with sweat. He wished they’d had the foresight to strip but when they got so caught up in the moment it was hard to remember practicalities.

Jae was panting heavily, his head falling forward. Yunho leant forward to lick a strip up the back of Jae’s neck before he sucked gently on the damp skin.

“Don’t leave a mark,” Jae warned, but his voice lacked any conviction.

“C’mere,” Yunho pulled away, slipping out of Jae but not letting go.

“Nnnnnh,” Jae whined as he felt Yunho leave him.

To placate his lover, Yunho pulled Jae back against his chest and whispered in his ear. “Round two?”

Jae nodded fervently and Yunho led him over to his bed for round two. No matter how much of a jealous bitch Jae could be, nothing could keep them apart for long and Yunho needed Jae right now, again and again and again.

~~~~

“Yes! Oh fuck!”

Jae’s legs tightened around Yunho as Yunho collapsed on top of him, both of them spent and all prior disputes long forgotten.

“I love you,” Yunho told Jae again, enjoying the way Jae revelled in those words each time.

“I know,” Jae grinned.

The door clicked open and Junsu walked in. “Have you seen—oh my God! Is there any room in this house that’s safe from you two?” Junsu exclaimed, blushing furiously.

“Bathroom?” Yunho suggested as he propped himself up over Jae.

“No, wait,” Jae piped up. “We need the bathroom next, right Yunho?”

Junsu threw his hands in the air. “Oh my God!” He said again and turned tail.

Jae grinned up at Yunho, so happy he felt he was floating on cloud nine.

“Ack! Oh, gross, is that...?” Junsu sounded disgusted and Yunho looked over to his band mate standing by the door, his fingers sticky with Jae’s... “Fuck you both! I quit the band!”

Yunho chortled and snuggled down on top of Jae, wrapping his arms around him as they tumbled down together amongst the blankets.

“So what are you cooking for Go Ara and I tonight?” he asked. Jae thumped his chest and narrowed his eyes. “I was kidding.” Yunho laughed.

“I don’t care, I may be able to admit to being your wife but I am not lifting a finger for that cow.”

Yunho decided to let that one slip and he distracted Jae with a gentle kiss. “Bathroom?” he suggested instead.

Jae nodded, shifting as Yunho began to feel uncomfortable inside him. Yunho laughed as Jae pulled a face. “You’d better clean me properly. I feel gross now.” Jae reached a hand between them to feel cooling come trickle down the inside of his thighs.

Yunho rolled his eyes and sat up, tugging Jae to sit up with him. “The fuck I will.”

Jae hissed and glared at Yunho. “If you don’t I’ll just invite Go Ara round for a bitching session about you.”

Yunho narrowed his eyes. “You wouldn’t.”

“Two can play at this game,” Jae warned him. “She’s actually very beautiful, you know.”

Yunho stared after him as Jae flounced over to the door, pulling it wide before turning to cast a look over his shoulder.

“Coming?”

Yunho had never left his bed faster.

The End. 

Pretty much my first attempt at delving into fanfiction that isn't Tokio Hotel. I'm so brand shiny new to this fandom I hope I didn't go too wrong, I have a lot to learn but I couldn't resist writing these two :) Thank you for reading! 

Page 1 of 2 << [1] [2] >>

Date: 2012-05-02 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melluransa.livejournal.com
AWWW! It was so angsty and it ended all loverly! I don't even know who Go Ara is but she's got nothing on Jae, so. ^_^ Congrats on your first fanfic for a new fandom!

Date: 2012-05-03 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
as my lovely kpop teacher [livejournal.com profile] beeswaxing told me, she starred in a drama opposite Yunho and they kissed, and she's popped up in some fics I've read, hence her appearance here :)

I'm so happy you read my love! I had a feeling most of my flist would be giving me dagger eyes xD So, thank you!

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] otakusj.livejournal.com - Date: 2012-05-05 03:50 pm (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com - Date: 2012-05-06 04:40 am (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2012-05-02 08:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] beeswaxing.livejournal.com
I love pissed off Yunho and jealous Jae is a glorious sight to behold :P And omg Junsu, poor Junsu :PPPPPP I love your characterization of all of them hahaha. Spot on, Min the smart one, Chunnie the cheeky naughty one :P and Junsu is Junsu. You will die when you come online tomorrow btw hahaha... I died myself from too many feels I could barely cook my jjajangmyun.

Date: 2012-05-03 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Me too!! Maybe that's why we <3 Damaged so much...

I'm so so happy you like the characterisations! Of course, I'm anxious about that because basically, I'm the newbie and am prone to getting things wrong. But YAY. If you liked it, idgaf about anything else.

And you're right about dying... aojdopsajdawdjaslakf FEELS.

Date: 2012-05-05 04:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miss-faces.livejournal.com
I loved this *-*
JAElous is always fun xDD

Date: 2012-05-05 04:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Eee, thank you! It's kinda nerve-racking to write for a new fandom so I'm so very happy you liked (n_n)

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] miss-faces.livejournal.com - Date: 2012-05-05 12:54 pm (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com - Date: 2012-05-06 04:41 am (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2012-05-05 04:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] phinea2009.livejournal.com
Yunjae's make up sex is the best.

Date: 2012-05-05 04:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
it's like no other :) thank you for reading!

Date: 2012-05-05 04:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saku-123.livejournal.com
i like it :) it was perfect, just the right amount of angst, the ending :D yunho better clean jae good ;) LOL, my sweet innocent(not so innocent anymore, XIA album!!!) junsu, his eyes!!!

Date: 2012-05-05 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! (n_n) I'm sure he will, he's not immune to Jae's advances!

Hee, poor Junsu indeed, it's okay, Changmin and Yoochun can patch him up again :):)

Date: 2012-05-05 05:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yunho-ism.livejournal.com
loved loved loved this!
the sweetness and the jealousy.<3
this is going straight to my mems.
thank you for sharing.^^

Date: 2012-05-05 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Thank you so much (n_n)! I'm so happy you liked it!

Date: 2012-05-05 05:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ultamatempa.livejournal.com
i'm really happy to see yunho not dropping his friends immediately for a jealous jae. a lot of fics do that and as much as it's romantic, in the real world i would not stand for that. jealousy in little increments in good, but too much just ruins the relationship.

Date: 2012-05-05 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
I'm glad you thought so! It's so weird being so new to a fandom, I feel like I don't know enough to start writing but I couldn't help myself (n_n) thank you for reading!

Date: 2012-05-05 05:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] isimplicityy.livejournal.com
Whoa you did a wonderful job with the argument. I felt like I was being sucked in and yea... very amazing writing.
I can understand Jaejoong's jealousy. Yunho has too many girl friends, and he's so darn nice to everyone. I love how possessive they are of each other. Sometimes it can be a huge turn off but somehow with this it seems perfect ^^.
I love the characters and how you portrayed them. Haha of course it would be Yoochun who would suggest watching their feud rather than running away from it.
Poor Su has to taint his eyes with YunJae sex. But I bet any fan would love to be in his place right then and there xD.

I really loved the way you wrote this and how Yunho & Jaejoong continuously confessed their need and love for each other whilst having sex and how they argued. I have a feeling I'll be coming back for more fics from you :D.

Welcome to the fandom by the way! So happy to see someone joining the Dong Bang love and not just picking a side to like. I'm sure the Cassiopeia family will welcome you with open arms♥.

Date: 2012-05-05 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Ohhh this is the most lovely comment! Thank you so much! I want to reply properly and I hope I have time before my laptop dies so here goes...

THANKYOU again. I'm a little floored right now, what a warm welcome into the fandom! This is the first time I've written outside my Tokio Hotel boys so it was nervous to share but I'm glad I did (n_n) I have a lot to learn so I was worried I wouldn't get the characterisations right!

Damn though, you're right about that, we would all luuurve to be un Su's place <3___<3

Hey, would you like to be my lj friend? It'd be nice to see some om my flist, if you don't mind ofc :):)

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] isimplicityy.livejournal.com - Date: 2012-05-05 06:54 am (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com - Date: 2012-05-06 04:54 am (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] isimplicityy.livejournal.com - Date: 2012-05-06 07:34 am (UTC) - Expand

(no subject)

From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com - Date: 2012-05-11 04:37 am (UTC) - Expand

Date: 2012-05-05 05:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gu2duck.livejournal.com
sometimes it makes me go crazy wif jae2's jealousy and possessiveness over yunnie *yeah, buddy i feel you* but secretly i think i know why yunnie intentionally frens wif her. i mean rounds of anger sex is quite a turn on too. LOLS

Date: 2012-05-06 04:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Hee rounds of anger sex is always fun :) even though this wasn't too angry xD Thank you for reading!

Date: 2012-05-05 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yunho1205.livejournal.com
Wow!!!! I really liked this! Good job hon!! I'll be sure to leave a better comment tomorrow, im dead tired! :)))))))

Date: 2012-05-06 04:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Thank you so very much (n_n) Aw, that's so kind, this comment was more than enough though :):) I so appreciate any response!

Date: 2012-05-05 06:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dulanis.livejournal.com
Yesss you nailed it bb. this is so good :)

Date: 2012-05-06 04:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
wow, thank you so much! :D

Date: 2012-05-05 07:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jhyjfan.livejournal.com
Jae's lucky that Yunho has the patience to put up w/ his craziness.

Duckbutt should have left w/ Min & drag Chun w/ him.

Date: 2012-05-06 04:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Hee, I agree! They're crazy for each other so it's okay :):)

Haha he really should have! Thank you for reading (n_n)

Date: 2012-05-05 09:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carmen-dbsklove.livejournal.com
JAElous jae is always feisty :3 me likey!

.... Loved the ending way toooooo much

Date: 2012-05-06 05:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! This is so nice to hear :D

Date: 2012-05-05 09:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lena-tvfxq5.livejournal.com
lol funny and hot xD I rly love how YunJae keep teasing eachother xD very good for a first YJ fic, rly liked the characters u gave them :)

Date: 2012-05-06 05:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! I'm so very excited to get such a kind response (n_n)

Date: 2012-05-05 10:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nwwo.livejournal.com
First; big warm welcome to Cassiopeia. ♥

Then to this fic... I really really liked this. Jealous Jaejoong is always fun to read about. Ah, everything about this was just perfect. I wouldn't have believed that this is your first time writing about these boys (or men).

Good job! I'm looking forward to your future YunJae fics as well. ^^

Date: 2012-05-06 05:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Thank you so much! Wow, what a welcome this is turning out to be :D

Oh, you make me smile (n_n) Thank you thank you! I was planning to wait a bit before I wrote anything but I really couldn't.

I'm certain I'll have more to show!

Date: 2012-05-05 10:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snow-meow.livejournal.com
LOL
I love when they fight and have make up sex.

When their fighting and if Yunho was to say that Jae looks beautiful like a girl or something like that, he would freak out.
But during sex time, it just turns him on.

I swear Changmin is the smartest to flee from the scene immediately.
Yoochun only wants to watch the good bits and poor Junsu is scandalized.
How can he remain innocent with those two hyungs. ^^

Date: 2012-05-06 05:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Hee, turns out I like that too :D

Haha that's what I want to know, what a poor upbringing Junsu has had to deal with xD

Thank you so much for reading!

Date: 2012-05-05 10:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suju-sapna.livejournal.com
I don't really like Fg with a jealous JJ but as I forced myself to read yours, I have to admit that I like yours!!
Thank you for sharing!!

Date: 2012-05-06 05:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
You're more than welcome! Thank YOU for giving it a chance and reading, I'm so thrilled :D

Date: 2012-05-05 12:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pabo-sarang.livejournal.com
lol when yunho said "i'll admit it! etc... she's a great fucking friend" i thought he meant she was a great friend to fuck xD anyway wow jaejoong is a bitch like a black pit of jealousy OTL

Date: 2012-05-06 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Hahah oops, my bad xD

Thank you so much for reading!

Date: 2012-05-05 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] muramatsu-aoi.livejournal.com
Welcome to the fandom!
i miss dongbang family fics & you've made my day.. haha..
i love how possessive jae is of yunho, and how even though yunho spends time with an attractive lady, he still has eyes for jae..
changmin's pretty much the smart maknae to flee the scene.. haha

Date: 2012-05-06 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Thank you so much :D

Oh, that is so nice to hear, I'm glad! I'm sure I'll have more to come of that family style.

Thank you for reading! (n_n)

Date: 2012-05-05 03:52 pm (UTC)
ext_951848: (Default)
From: [identity profile] otakusj.livejournal.com
jae really is bitchy!hahaha
jealous jae is like the epitome of bitchiness..
maybe next time it can be yunho who is jealous?hehe
yunjae is always horny~

Date: 2012-05-06 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
I like the idea of jealous Yunho, I think I'll write him soon :)

Thank you so much for reading!

Date: 2012-05-05 04:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sly-heiress.livejournal.com
“Go Ara says you owe me a blow job.”

I died laughing.

Date: 2012-05-06 05:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Hahah YAY :D Thank you so much for reading!

Date: 2012-05-05 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yunjae-luv.livejournal.com
i lobe jae being the JAElous bitch...lolll

Yunjae ╮(╯3╰)╭

Date: 2012-05-06 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Hee, thank you so much for reading :D

Date: 2012-05-05 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] delias-miso.livejournal.com
I LOVE IT! GREAT START AND ENDINg!

Date: 2012-05-06 05:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Thank you so very much (n_n)

Date: 2012-05-05 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilukyuwook.livejournal.com
Ohhhhh I wanted to smack yun for encouraging jj about ara beauty...honestly ara has nothing on jj he is just to beautiful:)
I looooove it:) first come the argue nets and after arguments comes make up sex lol
I looooove the love they have for each other and I like the while Junsu bit about quitting the band it was cute lol
Thankyu and welcome to yunjae world:)

Date: 2012-05-06 05:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
He IS so beautiful :) I don't hate Go Ara or anything, but Jae is too lovely. Plus, he's Yunho's.

Thank you so so much for reading and leaving such a kind comment (n_n)

Date: 2012-05-06 04:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tanya-h24.livejournal.com
make up sex is always >8) it's your first time writing about yj and it blows my mind :D this is awesome.
thanks for sharing this <3

Date: 2012-05-06 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] em-rose483.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you so so much! I'm thrilled you liked it (n_n)

You're more than welcome, I'm sure I'll have much more to share in the near future :D
Page 1 of 2 << [1] [2] >>

Profile

emilyexorsist: (Default)
em_rose483

October 2012

S M T W T F S
 12345 6
78910111213
14151617181920
212223242526 27
28293031   

Most Popular Tags

Style Credit

Expand Cut Tags

No cut tags
Page generated Jul. 27th, 2017 02:34 pm
Powered by Dreamwidth Studios